W.A.L.T rite a explanation
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19 October 2016
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I want to explain why Paroa School is the best school in Greymouth.
My main reason is because we have a pool ,2 playgrounds and a field our pool has some parents that clean it so we can learn to swim.
Another reason is. We have got 2 playgrounds for year 1-3 and 4-8 .This is so the little kids don't get hurt. It is really fun to play on it because there is a windy slide.
Also our school has a brilliant things to do at paroa school
we have a school song made by the school with mir m playing the guitar this song is about our school mir m started it and we improved the songs we listen to at assembly.
We have Turkana teina that is when a big kid buddy up with a little kid they help each other on Friday .We help them on their work and if they need help.
Paroa school has a library we have a librarians hir name is Catlin she looks after the books. I really paroa school because everyone is nice.
