explanation why paroa school is the best

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19 October 2016

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I want to explain why Paroa School is the best school in Greymouth.

My main reason is because we have a pool ,2 playgrounds and a field our pool has some parents that clean it so we can learn to swim.

Another reason is. We have got 2 playgrounds for year  1-3 and 4-8 .This is  so the little kids don't get hurt.  It is really fun to play on it   because there is a windy slide.

Also our school has a brilliant things to do at paroa school

we have a school song made by the school with mir m playing the guitar  this song is about our school mir m started  it and we improved the songs  we listen to at assembly.

We have Turkana teina that is when a big kid buddy up with  a little kid they  help each other on Friday .We help them on their work and if they need help.

Paroa school has a library   we have a librarians hir  name is Catlin she  looks after the books. I really  paroa school because everyone is nice.