Friday, 26 August 2016

Olympic momet in time


                                                         

WALT: write a moment in time.
  
 I stood   in the 1500 meters.  I stood  on the starting block.I heard people cheering for new Zealand . I saw the Ethiopians getting ready to race.  I saw the others centres trying to get a medal. But I was too fast for the Ethiopians .When the race was finished I stood on the podium with two Ethiopians I felt happy and proud.  I wondered if  my country got the most medals I wondered if my family was proud and happy and I wondered if  my flag would go up in the air.  

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jacob.
    Nice writing.
    I like the picture.
    To be btb can you make smaller sentence.
    thanks:)

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