WALT: write a moment in time.
I stood in the 1500 meters. I stood on the starting block.I heard people cheering for new Zealand . I saw the Ethiopians getting ready to race. I saw the others centres trying to get a medal. But I was too fast for the Ethiopians .When the race was finished I stood on the podium with two Ethiopians I felt happy and proud. I wondered if my country got the most medals I wondered if my family was proud and happy and I wondered if my flag would go up in the air.
Hi Jacob.
ReplyDeleteNice writing.
I like the picture.
To be btb can you make smaller sentence.
thanks:)