This is a good statement, however do you think you have explained it well enough? Remember what Mrs G said about your responses. You need to dig deep and explain the WHY- Why are you passionate about having a great family and having a roof over your head. You need to add to this Jacob. I look forward to seeing what you write Jacob. Mrs Read
Hi Jacob,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good statement, however do you think you have explained it well enough? Remember what Mrs G said about your responses. You need to dig deep and explain the WHY- Why are you passionate about having a great family and having a roof over your head. You need to add to this Jacob. I look forward to seeing what you write Jacob.
Mrs Read